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Tools of death were laid bare
Yellow infernos rage in their forest eyes
Growls gushed forth from writhing tongues
Their very essences made unstable.
White ivory slashes ripped the air
Spilling the guts of the sky
Ghastly intentions stripped to the bone.
©2007-2009 =Nightabsol
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Submitted: March 3, 2007
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Wrote this one at about eleven last night when I was in my bad mood. XD It's a description of two wolves fighting over dinner. *smacks lips*
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Wow, wonderfu poem! Great language! I can really picture the scene! :D
Thanks! I had my handy dandy thesaurus! XD

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Yep! Very useful! I usually use dictionary.com for my poems cos I dont have a thesaurus!!! hehe! oh, and your welcome!!! :D
Thanks! ^^

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wow cool me loves ^^

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